forever burned on my skin
I am branded


Haiku Heights Prompt- Fingerprints by Porcelain Lotus is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivs 3.0 Unported License.
Based on a work at http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/2013/07/haiku-heights-261-fingerprint.html.
I am wondering if 'branded' is in a good sense or evil intentions??
ReplyDeleteI was thinking about how some people come into your life, maybe just for a short time, and change you forever. Something about who they are or what they did continues to affect you long after they are gone. It could be in a good way or a bad way.
DeleteThis is a powerful one
ReplyDeletePowerful, dramatic =)
ReplyDeleteThank you! You need a little drama in poetry sometimes.
DeleteProfound and sensual. A stunning haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!
DeleteBranding suggests a kind of ownership or possession! That could be good or bad. But also branding marks do fade with time! A powerful haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteVery passionate haiku ~ It's a good metaphor to use ~
ReplyDeleteThank you
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