Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Haiku Heights Prompt- Fingerprints

He left fingerprints
forever burned on my skin
I am branded

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11 comments:

  1. NankaJuly 3, 2013 at 8:11 AM

    I am wondering if 'branded' is in a good sense or evil intentions??

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    1. LotusJuly 3, 2013 at 9:59 AM

      I was thinking about how some people come into your life, maybe just for a short time, and change you forever. Something about who they are or what they did continues to affect you long after they are gone. It could be in a good way or a bad way.

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  2. Reading PleasureJuly 3, 2013 at 10:28 AM

    This is a powerful one

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  3. AnonymousJuly 3, 2013 at 10:43 AM

    Powerful, dramatic =)

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    1. LotusJuly 3, 2013 at 10:47 AM

      Thank you! You need a little drama in poetry sometimes.

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  4. The Write GirlJuly 3, 2013 at 7:51 PM

    Profound and sensual. A stunning haiku.

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  5. Gemma WisemanJuly 6, 2013 at 6:53 PM

    Branding suggests a kind of ownership or possession! That could be good or bad. But also branding marks do fade with time! A powerful haiku!

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  6. ScarletJuly 9, 2013 at 6:43 AM

    Very passionate haiku ~ It's a good metaphor to use ~

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